Thy heart's sombre emotions,
all the way growing stronger...
a drop now, an ocean then,
it never seems to die.
It calls out, for its aching heart
is melting up, up and away...
So much for the pain!
Wont I meet you again?
An emotional stress, an aesthetic feeling,
something tells me you are around,
to my heart you are duty bound.
Wont thou ever be mine?
Emotion calls from its highest peak,
Love is there, strong but bleak.
Atheist are you, to my feelings?
Ignorant are you, of my pain?
Oh come now!Enough of the game...
Lets start...all over again.
Something seems to die in me,
Something seems to churn.
Ah!the pain it takes,
to go on and on and on...
Oh come now!Enough of the game...
Lets start...all over again...
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11 comments:
hey nice poem!! a very hopeful one i must say!!
glad u appreciate it..btw, it was written in kodaikanal at 1am in d balcony n' i wasnt sleepy n' freezing...lolz
hmm...
u r becoming more of a poet ....!!!
great one
i llike these showing n telling reality...!!
thx kartik...i appreciate ur views
ummm different poem but a nice well written one..
i never knew my sweet sis is so talented..it is very optimistic n i like d feel..keep it up
@kevin...u rly say sumfin' diff always
@cattie...am blushing!!!lolz...thx
nice!!!!!!
varsha i neva thot u cud write such a poem on d heart's wishes!....very well done!!!!
lolz...u dunno anyfin' abt me
Its An Unusual but gripping work! Keep it Up.. Hoping for more to come.
Optimistic and hopeful poem!
ur choice of words need a pat on ur bak sis !
keep up the good work !
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